LES PRINCIPALES MODIFICATIONS APPORTÉES AU TEXTE DE « PAULINE
. Wait for us in the darkness
. My first joy
. For all the wandering
. part of care
. e*er to have
. And creatures of my own were
mixed with them.
. a girl one has loved long silently . In her first loveliness, . when first emerged, all gaze and
glow to view.
. Her fresh eyes and soft hair and
lips which bleed
. Sweeter than all the pride of after
hours
. Ï am proud
. To have seen thee . Of all the harmonies which he cal-
led up
. But to each other
in the dark.
My first free: joy.
Since...
or Care.
e’en.
And with them creatures of my own were mixed.
one has silently loved long.
In her first loneliness.
when late emerged.
which bloom.
Sweeter than any pride.
I proudly feel. I would have thrown to dust.
To see thee.
Of which he called profusely Save to each other.
etc., etc...